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This took HOURS to make. I was trying to make this animation look good. First time making a short animation that isn't super random I guess.

Choob belongs to :icontrojevia: since I got permission for crome to hurt him.

Would have been better if it have noises, and voice overs. Oh well :shrug:

Anyway Crome had a rat in his cell that was really bothering him, so instead he decided to get rid of it. :lol:


Since some of it is going to fast here's what they are saying

Purple eyed Irken: So why does the empire let prisoners near Smeets again?

Maroon eyed Irken: Some sort of learning activity for the smeets, I think...
What ever the case is. I'm glad I'm up here and they're down there.

Purple eyed Irken: why did they have to pick prisoner 457?
And what's that box he's holding?

Maroon eyed Irken: How should I know what the crazy mutant psychopath mad scientist has.

Purple eyed Irken: It's a hideous rat!

Crome: Here's a little present from yours truly!!!

Maroon eyed Irken: Well...that's not good...

Choob: *screams*

Maroon eyed Irken: Um...well at least it hit the defective looking smeet...

Crome: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
*gets tased and collapses*

Purple eyed Irken: Well...that went well...
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MovieCatMar Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol
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IZluver87 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
LOVE IT!!! Its just too bad u cant give them voices.
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Reality-Blows Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This seems like something Jhonen would write (but with less blood)
It looks like you've made a leaping bound in animating, and that stuff is ape shit hard! Soon I take it you will put more frames in the movements and things will move more smoothly.
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, and learn how to use after effects better to add more smoother and cool effects to the animations.
Irkens aren't meant to be serious, they're supposed to be funny in a dark humorous way :lol:.
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Reality-Blows Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Exactly, because that's just how Jhonen is! Unfortunately I fail at that :saddummy:
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lots of people fail at it, don't worry. Lots of them try but some just add humor I find not really funny or dark. Just way too random humor.
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wolfphantom21 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwww crome could be a good babysitter ^^
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yes he would be 10 times worst than Vicky from the fairly odd parents! :iconikilleditplz:
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wolfphantom21 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O god lol it's like chrome go's to a day care
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Trojevia Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Yet Choob survives. Again. Fyi, his voice sounds like Skoodge's.
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Seeing that he seems to get beaten up by large creatures and stuck in blenders. He seems impervious just like skoodge :XD:
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Trojevia Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
YOU'RE RIGHT! Except that Choob is Erklatinek, not Irken (borrowed from Zonatello).
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh crap I forgot that species. I still can spell that either! :ohnoes:
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Trojevia Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's okay. It's not my word!
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ZontarZon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
POOR CHOOB!

lololol... I can't help but to laugh in his expense. :iconevulplz:
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He got mauled by a huge rat :lol:
And Crome enjoys his pain because since he's stuck behind a counter, he at least got to hurt someone anyway xD
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ZontarZon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I bet :D

RayRay is on the phone with me right now. She can't stop laughing! XD
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It was the rats face! And the faces, but mainly the rats face and choob screaming! :icondummydanceplz:
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ZontarZon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, of course. EVERYONE loves the look of Choob in pain. :iconimhappyplz:

RayRay and I find his indestructible self very fun to maul. Thing is, Choob is like Gumby. No matter how much you stretch him, he never gets a mark! :noes:
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
In that case Crome will love to use him as a punching bag, and maybe a rag to clean the prison windows during other community services xD
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ZontarZon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*GASP* I wanna see him used as a rag to clean windows!! 8D Just... ask RayRay and all that first ^^

Also... do you think there should be a Choob plz account? :? We've gotten several requests for one.
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah you could if you want to. Would be cute. :lol:
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Raven1Monet100 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
XD it went well indeed XDXDXD
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TheInkImp Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow! :D Great job!
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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De-PAKed Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a pretty good animation, it flows quite well. Although some motions are a bit too quick (such as when Crome pulled Ze Rat out of the box), but it was highly enjoyable; even without sounds or voices. I can't say anything about the mouths not matching the speech since there is no speech to match it to. :lol:
Indeed Purple Irken, that did go well.
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I'm still learning to animate better. Once I practice a little more, I'll try to not make the motions too quick. Lip syncing I have yet to even try out yet. Until I get proper voices or learn how to manipulate my voice to sound different, most of these animations will be silent and unmatched mouth movements. I might try looking into trying to find some free online sound effects though. I'm going to still continue with doing these shorts. I'm actually hoping to animate in the next blood sport if there is another season if I get much better at this :D
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De-PAKed Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... Now that would be amazing, I cannot wait to hear what sound effects you dig up. I could help find, or upload, some sound effects for you to use. :D
If you do do animations for the next Blood Sport, that would be even more amazing. :iconiloveitplz: It would be hell doing a decently lengthed animation, but it would be truly spectacular.
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That would be awesome! Need as much sound effects as possible :D
I estimate approximately 3 minutes I could make with animating in a week. A month, possibly 12 minutes if working on it constantly. By then I'll probably be way better at animating, and using after effects properly. Might even make it into one of those short films.
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De-PAKed Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, I'll try to dig them off of my old hard drive! And I'll ask my little sister if she can download some off her school's system, they have some good ones.
... Now that sounds amazing and doable! :omg: It would be just like movie nights of old, except not as long, and it is made by you! :D
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
aww the rat looks so cuute! lol poor Crome. He got tased
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It originally looks horrible, but since it's being tossed around its actually terrified :lol:.
Crome gets tased a lot xD
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
oh okay. I could imgaine crome going, "Is that the best you got?" Like Benny off of George Lopez.
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He does say that sometimes along with sarcasm :lol:
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
lol nice
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InvaderViv Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
Poor Crome.
He got tased.
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Angelfonds Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That's really good!
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invderzimfannumber1 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
Thanksn this was a good animation I feel sorry for the Irken Smeets.
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VoodooTea Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Poor Crome got tazed...But the fun was probably worth it x)!
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He at least was able to hurt the smeet xD
He loves seeing their pain :lol:
Though he probably gets tased a lot when was in prison.
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Musicture Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDD
This is really good :XD:
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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invderzimfannumber1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Um do you think you could either slow down the comic, have the aduio fo the comic play or write the writing in the authers's note becuase the writing went by too fast for me to read it and I bet I am not the only one that things that. Anyway good comic and I can't wait to read the real thing.
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't have voice actors so I can't place voice overs in the animation. I can write what they are saying within my summary though. Maybe later I'll see if I can increase time between actions when bringing up flash again.

It's a short animation. Just something random to practice my animation skills ^^;
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invderzimfannumber1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
I relize that but I still want to know what they are saying and you are good at animation so please tell me when you are done putting the lines in the summary
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just rewritten the script into the summary. Hope that helps.
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invderzimfannumber1 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
It probably will thanks and once I am done reading and watching it again I will review the acutal animation story
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SylvieNe Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. What's the music?
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RoboticMasterMind Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a celldweller beat I made and tweaked up in fl studio. It's just constant though, and nothing special.
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SylvieNe Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, well I liked it, it's awesome. :)
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